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Explanation for no Explanation by ~irvon:iconirvon:



I want to describe it
You
The way you expand
Over my head
Whisper words that are intertwined
I cannot understand
In my mortal form
You’ll take me along one day
I’ll realize what miracle
That I only know right now
I wonder
Gaze at an infinite pinnacle
And see
Nor color nor shape
Something else
I can’t describe it
You
But what it tells
You tell me to try
So I use conventional words
Beauty for one
Ravishing red for two
Endlessly enveloping edges for three
The next moment it’s gone
Taken by one sigh
You exhale to undo
The poetry that I write for you
It doesn’t show dissatisfaction
You don’t
But as long as you make me do
So long
Meaningless
Terminology
Take me as I am
Into whatever you are you know
I know of no ornithology
You won’t is a clear fact
Why is beyond my reach
I really have to feel the whistle
Wrong wind waves
Water walls white
Write words with a pistol
Crystal bullets creating the word
Plane on your ceiling
When I have described you
It
And you have become static
Majestic my equal through and through
Only then will I know why
I cannot
Simply
Die.
©2007-2010 ~irvon
:iconirvon:

Author's Comments

They've been keeping me too busy to write it and show it to you earlier;)

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:iconmesmeric-revelation:
nice open and flowy, little pieces of thoughts--i enjoyed reading your writing once again:D
:iconirvon:
I'm glad you did. I enjoyed writing once again, it's been a long time:)

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:iconshadow-mantis:
*gasp* AWESOME :D

"Wrong wind waves
Water walls white
Write words with a pistol" Nice work there :P

But yeah, I just adore how one thing morphs into the next, how it flows and progresses and parallels ... and how the end reminds me of Captain Jack Harkness, if you get that.

It's lovely ^_^

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Just make-believe.
:iconirvon:
Thank you so much:) I'm glad you liked it ^_^

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