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Reaching Boundaries by ~irvon:iconirvon:



thoughts are constricted, the breach to freedom is the tree falling in the forest

no one hears
“Yes” – reverberating through the photons
the granular medium not deep enough

tears are confined, the riverbed is grim with false determination
determined variables slip out of their values

the tree falls, about to hit the ground, the air, falls again

until I see

sound subtly escaping from underneath the swing of time, visibly

too optimistic for the faint of heart, the skulls are waiting to be cleaved
words won’t spring from them

the tapestries have always covered the floor, now that I fall
“No” – distance at all
a useless concept crosses the mind more often

beaks begin ticking the shell; eventually everything will flow
©2007-2010 ~irvon
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:iconshadow-mantis:
"the tapestries have always covered the floor, now that I fall" I feel sideways!! :P

Naturally, I'm not sure if this has a point, but it makes for an intriguing read :)

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Just make-believe.
:iconirvon:
Yep, poetry can make your world spin;)

Thank you for the comment:) and the fave:D

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I(now) = I(now - Δt) + Δt ∙ I(now - Δt) for Δt → 0
:iconirvon:
Uhm, yeah. Sometimes I forget to reply:XD:

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I(now) = I(now - Δt) + Δt ∙ I(now - Δt) for Δt → 0
:iconshadow-mantis:
Oh well, now it looks like you have extra comments :D

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Just make-believe.
:iconirvon:
Yeah, that's always a good thing.

:no: I wish I got more comments... :p

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I(now) = I(now - Δt) + Δt ∙ I(now - Δt) for Δt → 0
:iconshadow-mantis:
:P

Amazingly, I've had to poke no-one with a fork thus far to get them.

But I'll stop spamming your poem.

:spam:

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Just make-believe.

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