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The Moon is Far to Fetch

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The lunar eclipse colored the moon deep red
Unbelievably deep red

I breathed the breath everyone has drawn
And exhaled on the thuds
That I could barely distinguish

The moon refused to shine that night
We were in the way

Ironic

The fullest moon doesn’t shine
For the third day of the month of poetry, an older poem I hadn't posted yet.
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fadingtwilight0's avatar
....... I LOVE this. I love it.

I love how the first line mentions the lunar eclipse, then we were in the way, and the fullest moon doesn't shine.. oh man.

Did I mention I loved this?