literature

Toast

Deviation Actions

Daily Deviation

Daily Deviation

August 31, 2011
Toast by ~irvon is a wonderful example of how a good opening line (with good advice) entices you into the rest of a simplstic yet strong piece of spoken word.
Featured by BeccaJS
irvon's avatar
By
Published:
4.7K Views

Literature Text

Straight up, my friend:
that's the only way to drink a poem.

I raise my glass,
I know the drink, I know the game.

I don't want
your fancy blends,
mingled scents
a wine that doesn't know how to touch my mouth!

I raise my glass
and when I drink I understand.

My poison knows its purpose
and if you offer me your cup,
yours had better know it, too,
'cause I don't want to die confused,
amused, abused?

I choose
another death:

straight up, my friend,
straight up.
A short spoken word poem that I wrote on 30 June 2011. You could say that I was inspired by Mark Maslow.
© 2011 - 2024 irvon
Comments66
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
openskyline's avatar
Ooooh, that was good.