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Straight up, my friend:
that's the only way to drink a poem.

I raise my glass,
I know the drink, I know the game.

I don't want
your fancy blends,
mingled scents
a wine that doesn't know how to touch my mouth!

I raise my glass
and when I drink I understand.

My poison knows its purpose
and if you offer me your cup,
yours had better know it, too,
'cause I don't want to die confused,
amused, abused?

I choose
another death:

straight up, my friend,
straight up.
:iconirvon:
A short spoken word poem that I wrote on 30 June 2011. You could say that I was inspired by Mark Maslow.
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Given 2011-08-31
Toast by ~irvon is a wonderful example of how a good opening line (with good advice) entices you into the rest of a simplstic yet strong piece of spoken word. ( Featured by ^Beccalicious )
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:iconyeoldeivorytower:
One of the best poems I've read in a long time.
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:iconirvon:
Cheers! And thanks. :)
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:icongypsyfoxdancer:
Very good poem..."straight up.". :)
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:iconirvon:
Indeed. Thank you so much!
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:iconponyboycurtisismine:
Whoa! Thats REAL good! Im Ceral! Its soooo good! It was like....Amazing! and im not THAT into poerty, but this, this is REAL good, great stuff
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:iconirvon:
:bow: Thank you so much!
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:icontmpst24myst:
`tmpst24myst Aug 31, 2011  Student Writer
This reminds of something I would find as reading material in, "Hotel California." (A song, if you don't get the reference. By the Eagle) Epic.
And excellent poem, by the way. It took me back to my own hotel California, so to speak.
Dae
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